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Sky by YakitatePan Sky by YakitatePan
just wanted to try something new ;w;

so that I could finally draw something someday with complete scenery backgrounds :3

well, :3 it sucks. mouse-made lol
since this is ma first time doing something like this xD
would anyone dare to critique this? good or bad, any type :3 I don't mind haha cause I really want to improve my bg skills :iconcrycryplz:

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The gradient on this is excellently executed. How the colors and the hues are made into gradient give it the true sky feel. However, but the clouds are what give the illusion off just as they make the art here. There isn't anything wrong with the clouds really, not unless you have a strict taste for hyper-realistic skies. There is an elegance in the cartoony feel of the clouds though, like its fit for a uniquely styled setting for a fantasy story of the said medium. I like how it reminds me of video games and cartoons though. A nostalgic aura to this piece. Almost as if you are expecting the clouds to move at any given moment. Lovely indeed.
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Honestly, I am amazed by the rendering of this, given that the artist is a mouse user. You can consider the following as mere nit-picks of mine but it is helpful to remember them anyway.

For one, it is advisable to have only one light source in which all the gradients and shadings will follow. Despite light is usually scattered in the sky, it still generally follows the main light source of it (e.g. sun, moon, terrestrial spotlight). The lighting in the image is not very consistent.

Two, (well, actually given the limit of the mouse, this is actually forgivable. And to be honest, impressive for the artist to achieve this level with said limit) the smoothness of the rendering could use improvement.

Three, the clouds seem to lie on planes angled differently. It's hard to describe by merely words but, you can imagine clouds being some solid-liquid mixture lying on an invisible plane across the sky. Meaning, clouds (the bases of them at least) would lie parallel, or concentric depending on the angle. Basta, the lie on planes na hindi bali-bali, napatagalog ako, di ko maexplain.

That is pretty much it for me...As I said, it's a good piece, and all I said are just details that could further improve it. Also, I suggest to study up different types of clouds and their characteristics. Anyway, good job and good luck~!
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AremisS Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
teach me, sensei *u*
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
waahh ;w; dun call me sensei btw hehe im not really awesome lol

you're a mouse artist? umaygad you love Narutoo too!!!!
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AremisS Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
/yes yu are :3 /

no I have got tablet.., but my tablet is retarded ._: and yes I love naruto :3
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ohoho :iconruncryplz: im not ;w; but thanks fo that hehe

ooohh why retarded? xD lol, yes!! Naruto is awesome haha
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AremisS Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
yw ;3
Because she is doing what she wants T_T ( I called my tablet Evangelina :DD ) yeah :3
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hoho she's a girl xD

mine's Kaori haha
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AremisS Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
She is lady 8DDD

Nice name :D
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oooh xD well, isnt lady and girl the same? xD lol

huheue sankyuu,yers too ^___
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Jerikuto Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
You sho awesome bro, I couldn't draw this on my tablet or with pencil traditionally, I'm just wow, just wow really Chinatsu Yoshikawa (Fangirling) [V1] 

Imagine (oops I use imagine haha :iconimaginationplz:) when you have a tablet I might be wowing all the time Kyouko Toshinou (Imagining) [V1] 
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah just imagine xD (ima stay away from spongebob for now) haha

thank you sho much bro.

well they look like cotton lol xD
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