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just wanted to try something new ;w;

so that I could finally draw something someday with complete scenery backgrounds :3

well, :3 it sucks. mouse-made lol
since this is ma first time doing something like this xD
would anyone dare to critique this? good or bad, any type :3 I don't mind haha cause I really want to improve my bg skills :iconcrycryplz:

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The gradient on this is excellently executed. How the colors and the hues are made into gradient give it the true sky feel. However, but the clouds are what give the illusion off just as they make the art here. There isn't anything wrong with the clouds really, not unless you have a strict taste for hyper-realistic skies. There is an elegance in the cartoony feel of the clouds though, like its fit for a uniquely styled setting for a fantasy story of the said medium. I like how it reminds me of video games and cartoons though. A nostalgic aura to this piece. Almost as if you are expecting the clouds to move at any given moment. Lovely indeed.
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Honestly, I am amazed by the rendering of this, given that the artist is a mouse user. You can consider the following as mere nit-picks of mine but it is helpful to remember them anyway.

For one, it is advisable to have only one light source in which all the gradients and shadings will follow. Despite light is usually scattered in the sky, it still generally follows the main light source of it (e.g. sun, moon, terrestrial spotlight). The lighting in the image is not very consistent.

Two, (well, actually given the limit of the mouse, this is actually forgivable. And to be honest, impressive for the artist to achieve this level with said limit) the smoothness of the rendering could use improvement.

Three, the clouds seem to lie on planes angled differently. It's hard to describe by merely words but, you can imagine clouds being some solid-liquid mixture lying on an invisible plane across the sky. Meaning, clouds (the bases of them at least) would lie parallel, or concentric depending on the angle. Basta, the lie on planes na hindi bali-bali, napatagalog ako, di ko maexplain.

That is pretty much it for me...As I said, it's a good piece, and all I said are just details that could further improve it. Also, I suggest to study up different types of clouds and their characteristics. Anyway, good job and good luck~!
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AremisS Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
teach me, sensei *u*
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
waahh ;w; dun call me sensei btw hehe im not really awesome lol

you're a mouse artist? umaygad you love Narutoo too!!!!
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AremisS Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
/yes yu are :3 /

no I have got tablet.., but my tablet is retarded ._: and yes I love naruto :3
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ohoho :iconruncryplz: im not ;w; but thanks fo that hehe

ooohh why retarded? xD lol, yes!! Naruto is awesome haha
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AremisS Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
yw ;3
Because she is doing what she wants T_T ( I called my tablet Evangelina :DD ) yeah :3
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hoho she's a girl xD

mine's Kaori haha
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AremisS Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
She is lady 8DDD

Nice name :D
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oooh xD well, isnt lady and girl the same? xD lol

huheue sankyuu,yers too ^___
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Jerikuto Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
You sho awesome bro, I couldn't draw this on my tablet or with pencil traditionally, I'm just wow, just wow really Chinatsu Yoshikawa (Fangirling) [V1] 

Imagine (oops I use imagine haha :iconimaginationplz:) when you have a tablet I might be wowing all the time Kyouko Toshinou (Imagining) [V1] 
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah just imagine xD (ima stay away from spongebob for now) haha

thank you sho much bro.

well they look like cotton lol xD
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Jerikuto Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014
But he's always on the look though XD E83e6a55169b9b61574e007f by Jerikuto  

You're welcome yo

No lol, they look alright, maybe just a little blurred butt they do look amazing Kudryavka Noumi (Fangirling) [V3] 
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PrinceCaeruu Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
I-I....wow...and this is made by a mouse?!?! holy shit
Wa, I'm sorry! haha. Pero galing! :iconslowclapplz:
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well it sucks lol

naha pero maraming salamat po TTwTT)//
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PrinceCaeruu Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
ehhh, no it doesn't.
No problem!! :la::la:
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azuna10 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student Artist
Galing! parang realistic talaga! XD
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nehe :'D

thank you bai xD need pa imprubmints lol
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bettamsart Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hi i think it is very clever i love the shapes and colour xx
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
aww thank you mam :')
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bettamsart Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your welcome xx
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tooCOOgoo Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
kung gamit nyu po d2 ay mouse.. saludo po ako sa inyo.. ang hirap manipulahin ng mouse.. bilib po ako sa pasensya nyu po :)

para po sa akin.. magaling po kau kahit first time.
hmmm.. peo po para sa akin ang kulang lng po d2 ay ung umf factor po :)..may pagkaflat po kc.. 
para po maging malapit sa pagiging makatotohanan.. parang kulang po sa shadows that highlight the beauty of the shapes of the clouds that makes it dramatic :)..
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
keye nge eh :3

flat huehue

pag aaralan ko pa para ma 3D epek style something (lol)
hehe salamat po ^__________^
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tooCOOgoo Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
Share ko lng po i2..

www.deviantart.com/art/Drawing…

pwede nyu pong gawing reference :)
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
waw anggaaaling !!

waaa thank you :'3 Ima try to do do that someday nehe ;w;
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tooCOOgoo Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
wah oo nga po~ grabe!
anyways po.. walang anuman po.. I'm sure po yakang-yaka nyu po yan :)
malakas po ang pananalig ko po sa inyo ^^>
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nehe.

wooh! salamat XD

ikaw din po ^____________^

ima expect a lot from you as well :')
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tooCOOgoo Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014
it's mah pleasure po~

aw. tenks po~ :3
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choco-java Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Student General Artist
hmm...remind me to type up a cri i tomorrow. i cant type on a tablet pc. ^^;

but generally, its good..i just have some nitpicks.
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yey :icononiskiplz:

ima wait fo it :D
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choco-java Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Student General Artist
alright, here we go..

*cracks knucles*
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kiryutcz3000 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well if it's for first time , I am very impressed ! This is magnificent , it'll make you smile with bright colors !
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
huehue xD salamat bro lol

dapat may dagat dyan sa baba e haha
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kiryutcz3000 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Geh , para mas maganda , but do also the reflection of the sky XD
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha anhirap xD pag gumaling nako yan gagawin ko haha
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kiryutcz3000 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahahahaha kaya mo yan may bilib ako sayo 



Di ko maiwasan ang pag-ingles huehue
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha salamat bro :'D

okay lang yan, para pang international na tayo haha
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kiryutcz3000 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahahha sige~

May pasok na ako bukas , good night na at God Bless :')
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YakitatePan Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha same pre :')
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